When Ryan Owed In Aunt Ida's Shop
Ryan entered the house’s gate. He took a snack and eaten it fastly while his eyes looked worry into house. He didn’t want mother know if he had a snack, because his mother would be angry.
But poor Ryan, mother was drying clothes in yard. She looked Ryan eat something and she asked.
“Ryan, where do you get the snack?” mother asked.
“I buy it in Aunt Ida’s Shop, Mom!”
“Buy? You don’t have a money, Child!”
“Yeah…Dad will pay it, Mom!”
“You owe in Aunt Ida’s Shop?”
Ryan nodded his head. His mother would be angry, but she canceled it. She talked it with her husband when Ryan had slept.
“Dad, do you know if Ryan often owe in Aunt Ida’s shop?” she asked. She surprised when his husband nodded. “You know if Ryan owe, but you never tell me, why?”
Ryan’s father just smiled. “Yeah, I think it’s not a seriously problem. Ryan don’t owe too much, just two thousand until five. Aunt Ida tell me if Ryan have taken something, and I pay it.”
Ryan’s mother shaked her head. She was angry. “I don’t agree with you, Dad. You know, it’s mean that you make Ryan think if owe is right. Maybe now he just owe a thousand, but how about a year? Five years later? Or if he become adult? I don’t want it, Dad!”
Ryan’s father thought for a minutes, and his wive was right. “Yeah, I’m sorry. I will talk to him.”
Someday later, Ryan came home with a snack again. His father asked him. “Ryan, where do you get the snack?”
“I Buy it in Aunt Ida’s shop, Dad!”
“You owe it again?”
Ryan nodded. “Yes, Dad!”
“You can’t owe again, Ryan. That’s not good!”
But Ryan shaked his head. “Don’t worry, Dad. Mom’s Nini have much money to pay it!”
Ryan’s father dan mother couldn’t say something. They looked each other, asked for a solution while Ryan entered his room. They knew one thing, Ryan wouldn’t ever change if only by an adivice. They had to do something and next day, they talked to Aunt Ida.
Someday later, Ryan owed again. He took a candy and when he left shop, Aunt Ida stoped him.
“Ryan, when you will pay your debt?”
“My Dad have payed it, Aunt!”
Aunt Ida shaked her head. “Oh, no, Ryan. You buy it, you eat it, you pay it. Not your mother, not your father. Just you!”
“But, Aunt Ida, I…”
Aunt Ida interrupted. “You have to pay, you can't just escape from this!”
Ryan afraid. Aunt Ida looked so angry. She opened wide her eyes. Ryan started to cry.
“But, I don’t have money, Aunt Ida. I will ask to my mother,” Ryan screamed.
“Oh, no! That’s not your money. That’s your mother’s money.”
“But aunt, I don’t have money…” Ryan cried.
Aunt Ida nodded. “Okay, you don’t have money. You can pay it with work in my shop!”
At least, Ryan didn’t have a choice. He worked in Aunt Ida’s shop. He cleaned the floor and windows while his tear droped down in cheek. He put the goods in shop table, took a snack which was bought by someone.
Aunt Ida let him left on 5 PM. Ryan was very tired. He ran home and cried.
“Mom, I don’t want to broom Aunt Ida’s floor again. I don’t owe again!” he screamed.
Ryan’s mother and father just smiled, they hug Ryan togheter. And right, Ryan never owed anymore.
*****
11April 2009
*Uji coba bikin cerpen bahasa inggris, klo ada salah gramar jangan diketawain*
But poor Ryan, mother was drying clothes in yard. She looked Ryan eat something and she asked.
“Ryan, where do you get the snack?” mother asked.
“I buy it in Aunt Ida’s Shop, Mom!”
“Buy? You don’t have a money, Child!”
“Yeah…Dad will pay it, Mom!”
“You owe in Aunt Ida’s Shop?”
Ryan nodded his head. His mother would be angry, but she canceled it. She talked it with her husband when Ryan had slept.
“Dad, do you know if Ryan often owe in Aunt Ida’s shop?” she asked. She surprised when his husband nodded. “You know if Ryan owe, but you never tell me, why?”
Ryan’s father just smiled. “Yeah, I think it’s not a seriously problem. Ryan don’t owe too much, just two thousand until five. Aunt Ida tell me if Ryan have taken something, and I pay it.”
Ryan’s mother shaked her head. She was angry. “I don’t agree with you, Dad. You know, it’s mean that you make Ryan think if owe is right. Maybe now he just owe a thousand, but how about a year? Five years later? Or if he become adult? I don’t want it, Dad!”
Ryan’s father thought for a minutes, and his wive was right. “Yeah, I’m sorry. I will talk to him.”
Someday later, Ryan came home with a snack again. His father asked him. “Ryan, where do you get the snack?”
“I Buy it in Aunt Ida’s shop, Dad!”
“You owe it again?”
Ryan nodded. “Yes, Dad!”
“You can’t owe again, Ryan. That’s not good!”
But Ryan shaked his head. “Don’t worry, Dad. Mom’s Nini have much money to pay it!”
Ryan’s father dan mother couldn’t say something. They looked each other, asked for a solution while Ryan entered his room. They knew one thing, Ryan wouldn’t ever change if only by an adivice. They had to do something and next day, they talked to Aunt Ida.
Someday later, Ryan owed again. He took a candy and when he left shop, Aunt Ida stoped him.
“Ryan, when you will pay your debt?”
“My Dad have payed it, Aunt!”
Aunt Ida shaked her head. “Oh, no, Ryan. You buy it, you eat it, you pay it. Not your mother, not your father. Just you!”
“But, Aunt Ida, I…”
Aunt Ida interrupted. “You have to pay, you can't just escape from this!”
Ryan afraid. Aunt Ida looked so angry. She opened wide her eyes. Ryan started to cry.
“But, I don’t have money, Aunt Ida. I will ask to my mother,” Ryan screamed.
“Oh, no! That’s not your money. That’s your mother’s money.”
“But aunt, I don’t have money…” Ryan cried.
Aunt Ida nodded. “Okay, you don’t have money. You can pay it with work in my shop!”
At least, Ryan didn’t have a choice. He worked in Aunt Ida’s shop. He cleaned the floor and windows while his tear droped down in cheek. He put the goods in shop table, took a snack which was bought by someone.
Aunt Ida let him left on 5 PM. Ryan was very tired. He ran home and cried.
“Mom, I don’t want to broom Aunt Ida’s floor again. I don’t owe again!” he screamed.
Ryan’s mother and father just smiled, they hug Ryan togheter. And right, Ryan never owed anymore.
*****
11April 2009
*Uji coba bikin cerpen bahasa inggris, klo ada salah gramar jangan diketawain*
:e: postingan terjadwal gagal total....
BalasHapus:j: wuiiiihhhhh... pake bahasa linggis sekaraaanngg cieee.... (sok) baca dulu ahh... mumpung sepammer belum dateng :n:
BalasHapusbacanya sambil minum kopi enak kali yaks.... :f: uppsss... lupa kalo puasa.... :j:
BalasHapusngapain sih si ryan harus ngutang segala ke semutr ida... ehhh aunt ya??? kirain ant...
BalasHapus:c: ntar lagi sepammer dateng kayaknya... pulang ahh....
BalasHapuslagi... apdeeeettttt :l: ente lama banget ga apdet siy... huhhhhhh... >.<
BalasHapusNi anak komengnya selalu ngawur, bukannya komengin salah gramar atau ceritanya gimana, huaaaaa...... *ga ada emo nangis*
BalasHapusnice story ....
BalasHapuspoor Ryan yang hobinya selalu ngutang ya .
i like the way ... how his parents teach him.
Nice story Chi...
BalasHapusCheck this: "I buy it in Aunt Ida's shop, Mom!"
it must be "I bought it in aunt Ida's shop, Mom!"
because it's past tense, sorry for the correction.
My suggestion is, before you post something in English, type it in Ms Word, and check it with spelling grammar check, it will help.
Keep a good post....
Nice try..
BalasHapusWe learn something good from this story
@ bang tukang komeng, iya thanks atas koreksinya, tpi klo di nopel2 bahasa inggris kulihat, kalau kalimat tak langsung tetep pake simple tense dia. maksudnya dalam tanda petik ntu :P
BalasHapusuji coba baca
BalasHapuskalo nggak ngerti jangan diketawain
Make bhs antah-berantah, waduh maaf nih kalo gitu.. gak bs ngoreksi. Lha wong mudeng aja kgk.. hihi..
BalasHapuswilujeng enjing ajah..
kenapa ryan berhutang????.....kan sudah diselamatkan tom hanks (lho itu saving private ryan ya...????) hehehehe kabur sebelum yng punya datang!!!!
BalasHapusNchiii... aku bkn abang tkng bakso, kok bang sih. Aa gitu.. xixixi *kabuurr..
BalasHapuskereeen...boleh juga nih si nchi.
BalasHapusUhukk..uhur...bingung baca'x, wkwkkwk....
BalasHapusSabar, tak pake Google Translate dulu yeee.... :g:
:d: konsen tika terganggu gara2 ada tukang AC dpn mata
BalasHapusnice story...
BalasHapusi wish ryan not become ryan from jombang :k:
walah walah boro-boro suru ngcekin grammar, vacob aja wen masih minim, ngajakin brantem ni chi:d:
BalasHapusnice..nice story...terus berkarya..sukses tetap ada ....
BalasHapusterpaksa buwel nranslate duyu ya chi.....hiiiii
BalasHapusO IM Gie
BalasHapuswuih meski nggak p0aham grammar inggrisnya, setelah di tramslate, ceritanya menarik chi.....keknya tentang pelajaran supaya orang gak berhutang ya....
BalasHapuscie..salut deh chi, udah bisa bikin cerpen bahasa inggris.. kadang buat ngomong aja suka ngawur nih
BalasHapusnchiii....keren pake basa planet . :g:
BalasHapusada translator ke basa jawa apa sunda gak?
BalasHapussekali2 pake basa bali , boleh gak nchi ...
BalasHapusmbaca dulu yah ...
BalasHapuskomengnya ntar , perlu konsentrasi tinggi nich ...
besok ryan disuruh ke terminal aja , ngamen buat jajan xixixixi
BalasHapusnice story nchi...tetep semangat , chayooo...
BalasHapusneng nchi..
BalasHapusini pengalaman pribadi ya?
tukang ngutang iiihh
ternyata nchi gak sedudud yang kucing kira hahahahha.....
BalasHapusI think I like the way you wrote this
BalasHapusI also wrote in my blog with this language (pernah sih dulu)but really.. the grammar is not good hehe
but it's okay, we have to learn it
saya ndak paham....:b:
BalasHapustapi pinter sih bikin cerita pake boso linggis..
:i: teh linda ngapain bawa-bawa kucing segala???? :d:
BalasHapusNchi...ini bahasa Korea apa Zimbabwe??
BalasHapusNchi..walaupun aku lahir di New York, besar di London..tapi kalo bahasa Zimbabwe gini aku nggak ngerti juga
BalasHapuswehhhhhhhhh boso linggisnya mantap
BalasHapusaku ra mudeng
ewotnya dah kupajang dengan sukses
tengkyu ya
anjriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittt.. keren abeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessss!!!
BalasHapuspagi chiiiiiiiiii.........................
BalasHapuschi
BalasHapusudh ada yg ngomong jorok tuuh yg komeng di atasku si tukang siomay hahahahha
wkwkwkwk...grammarnya dh bagus ntu, tingkatkan sampe tingkat ke 20 :f:
BalasHapuskasian rian, suka banget makan cemilan, ama mamanya gag dikasih, akhirnya ngutang dh. mamanya sih sayang anak...:d:
BalasHapus:g: te3ka lutu na...jadi inget rian jombang, gimana kabarnya ntu anak ya? pha masih berhalusinasi pacaran ma indra brugman :n:
BalasHapusNchi, klo malingsia dijadiin sambel pete gimana rasanya ya? secara mereka kn gag kenal pete. UUUpppssss....jgn2 pete diklaim pula :l:
BalasHapus